My writing voice is sometimes kind
of sarcastic. “Hannah, Aria, Spencer, and Emily are just getting over the fact
that their best friend had been slaughtered. They try to ignore it and avoid
the topic, but somehow it always comes up,” I wrote on my most recent blog
post. It is kind of hard to avoid the topic when someone had just been
murdered, so it shows some irony.
2. What purposeful diction AND syntax choices did you make to enhance your writer’s voice? You
must choose to discuss at least one
diction AND one syntax technique from the list below. Make sure to include textual evidence from your post where
you included the diction and syntax choices you discuss.
My
diction is low/informal mostly. “Hannah, Aria, Spencer, and Emily are just
getting over the fact that their best friend had been slaughtered,” I wrote.
Instead of killed, I used slaughtered so enhance the gruesome death Alison had.
The
syntax is use is mostly medium length sentences because I am usually informing
the reader of what is happening in the story. I usually just use periods, but I
would like to work on asking more questions to make the reader think a bit.
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